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What to Write in a Valentine’s Day Card

The hardest small card there is, because the printed verse has already said the obvious thing and left you the specific one. Sorted by how long you have been together, which is what actually changes the wording.

Season’s Greetings Happy Valentine’s Day. Stillyou. PRINTED YOURS
New relationship
Understate it. Warm and light beats a declaration in month three.
Long relationship
Be specific about now, not about the wedding. A detail from this year is the gift.
Married a long time
The small ongoing thing — the tea, the lift, the way they handle your family.
Sending it anonymously
Keep it short, keep it kind, and do not make it a puzzle they have to solve.
1 2 3 GREETING THE SPECIFIC LINE YOUR NAME
The card that gets kept is three sentences, and only the middle one is hard.
  1. 1The greeting. Any of the usual ones. This part is not the work
  2. 2One specific thing only they would recognise — this is the whole card
  3. 3Your name, in full if there is any chance they will not place you

Short, for any stage

  1. 1 Happy Valentine’s Day. Still you.
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  2. 2 Happy Valentine’s Day. Glad it is you.
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  3. 3 Happy Valentine’s Day. No notes, no complaints.
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  4. 4 Happy Valentine’s Day. I would pick you again.
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  5. 5 Happy Valentine’s Day. Same as last year, only more so.
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Early on, when a declaration would be too much

The most common mistake on this card is saying something four months bigger than the relationship.

  1. 6 Happy Valentine’s Day. This is going well and I am enjoying it.
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  2. 7 Happy Valentine’s Day. I am very glad you texted back.
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  3. 8 Happy Valentine’s Day. Whatever this is, I like it.
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  4. 9 Happy Valentine’s Day. No pressure on the card, no pressure on you.
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A few years in

  1. 10 Happy Valentine’s Day. Three years and you still make me laugh in the supermarket.
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  2. 11 Happy Valentine’s Day. I like our ordinary evenings more than most people’s big ones.
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  3. 12 Happy Valentine’s Day. Best decision I have made and it was not close.
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  4. 13 Happy Valentine’s Day. Thank you for this year. It was a heavy one and you carried a lot of it.
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Married a long time

  1. 14 Happy Valentine’s Day. Twenty-two years and you still bring the tea up without being asked.
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  2. 15 Happy Valentine’s Day. I would do all of it again, including the parts we do not talk about.
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  3. 16 Happy Valentine’s Day. Thank you for the mornings. Nobody writes cards about the mornings.
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  4. 17 Happy Valentine’s Day. Still the person I want to tell things to first.
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Naming one specific thing

Pick something from the last twelve months. This is the section that turns a card into a message.

  1. 18 Thank you for driving through the night in November. I have not forgotten and I will not.
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  2. 19 Happy Valentine’s Day. Thank you for how you were with my mother this year.
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  3. 20 You made a bad year survivable and you did it without making it a thing.
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  4. 21 Happy Valentine’s Day. Thank you for the ordinary Tuesday things nobody notices except me.
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Funny, without deflating it

  1. 22 Happy Valentine’s Day. I have read the card, I agree with it, and I would not have phrased it that way.
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  2. 23 Happy Valentine’s Day. You are my favourite person in this house by a comfortable margin.
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  3. 24 Happy Valentine’s Day. Roses are expensive in February. You get a card and my continued devotion.
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  4. 25 Happy Valentine’s Day. Still tolerating each other beautifully.
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When you are apart

  1. 26 Happy Valentine’s Day. Wrong continent, right person.
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  2. 27 Happy Valentine’s Day. Six weeks to go and I am counting properly.
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  3. 28 Happy Valentine’s Day. The flat is quieter and considerably worse.
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To a partner going through something hard

  1. 29 Happy Valentine’s Day. You do not have to be all right today. I am here either way.
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  2. 30 Happy Valentine’s Day. Whatever this year does, I am in it with you.
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  3. 31 Happy Valentine’s Day. No expectations. Just here.
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Anonymous, or to someone you have not told

Kind and light. A card that demands a response puts the recipient in an awkward position.

  1. 32 Happy Valentine’s Day. From someone who thinks you are great.
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  2. 33 Happy Valentine’s Day. No pressure and no reply expected — I just wanted you to have a card.
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  3. 34 Happy Valentine’s Day. From an admirer with poor handwriting and good taste.
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To a friend, on Valentine’s Day

  1. 35 Happy Valentine’s Day. Platonic, sincere, and long overdue.
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  2. 36 Happy Valentine’s Day. You are one of the best things in my life and you get a card for it.
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  3. 37 Happy Valentine’s Day. Fifteen years of friendship deserves a card at least once.
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From a child, at school

  1. 38 Happy Valentine’s Day. You are a good friend.
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  2. 39 Happy Valentine’s Day! From your friend in Class 4.
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Signing it

  1. 40 For a partner, however you sign a note left on the kitchen table.
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  2. 41 Anonymous cards stay anonymous. Half-signing it is worse than either option.
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  3. 42 If it is a first card, sign your name. Mystery is only fun for the sender.
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Questions people actually ask

What do you write in a Valentine’s Day card?

One specific thing from the last year, and what it meant. The printed verse has already covered love in general; the handwritten line is where the person gets named.

What do you write in a Valentine’s card in a new relationship?

Keep it lighter than you feel. "Happy Valentine’s Day. This is going well and I am enjoying it" is warm without being a declaration you cannot yet make.

What do you write in a Valentine’s card for your husband or wife of many years?

Something small and current — the tea, the lift to the station, how they were with your family this year. Long marriages are made of those and almost no card mentions them.

Is it okay to send an anonymous Valentine’s card?

Yes, if it is kind, short, and expects nothing. Anything that reads as a demand for a response, or a puzzle to be solved, puts the recipient in an awkward position.

Can you send a Valentine’s card to a friend?

Yes, and it has become common. Say it is platonic in the card itself so there is no ambiguity to manage afterwards.